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I have to say this is quite odd..... very odd.... it's censored but it's still suggestive like the character is wearing a speedo. I do like the pen work you used here, we can see it over the sketching lines you did in order to make sure everything looks symmetrical as possible. Being a slime guy, symmetry isn't something you're looking fore, and I'm quite glad the slime doesn't look like that either. They're right arm, although not in view, looks as if it's melted into their body without them knowing, and that expression... it as the look of horror written all over there face. I'd imagine being slime isn't fun. Or turning into slime (reminds me of the Incredible Melting Man movie). The strings on the mouth is pure gold, and is necessary, showing that it's sticky stuff they're made out of. The dark colored eyes is also a good touch, shows how much inhuman they've become. 

As for areas of improvement, well let's see... everything seems to be in order. However, his arm looks a little meek compared to his chiseled body. Try to make the muscles on the legs and arms look the same as the body. One rule of thumb, if they have pecs, then there should be some detail on their legs and arms for muscles popping out. Don't be afraid if it makes them look a little too buff. You could add in just minimal lines to suggest it, and maybe even some slime drips between the lines to show that they're melting sort of with their bodily details. Sounds kind of horrifying don't ya think? 

Overall I like this. It's a bit suggestive (especially with that little drip on the crouch) and it's overall horrifying at the same time. Like straight from a horror book. I like how your sketch work goes, and I do like the details in this character. It's simple but very effective and shows us (or gives us rather) an idea of what sort of slime he's made of, the stickiness of it all, and what's happening to him. He may very well be a slime at the end of this comment. 

Anyways, great work and keep up the good work. :thumbsup: